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by jabbers
Sun Nov 18, 2018 11:31 pm
Forum: Turing Point and Chymistra
Topic: "Chymistra" #3
Replies: 1
Views: 18

Re: "Chymistra" #3

Welcome back! I don't know if the themes and characters of this series will end up holding my interest but the artwork is nicely done. Without much context for Turing's plans and these characters, it has been difficult to stay invested as a reader. I'll keep an eye out for any interesting developmen...
by jabbers
Sun Nov 18, 2018 11:10 pm
Forum: Military Machine
Topic: "Military Machine" #7
Replies: 12
Views: 142

Re: "Military Machine" #7

I appreciated her varying facial expressions throughout the chapter. The mechanism for breaking the feedback loop was an entertaining idea. Noting the flashbacks and the couple references to her past, I'm curious to see if any of it will play a role, beyond perhaps making her more susceptible for wh...
by jabbers
Sun Nov 18, 2018 10:56 pm
Forum: Play Nice
Topic: Members Update - PLAY NICE chapter three !!
Replies: 7
Views: 104

Re: Members Update - PLAY NICE chapter three !!

There are many aspects of this predicament that makes it entertaining. Their positioning and the variety of restraint accessories are well chosen. The spinning and tug of war elements add to the level of amusement. Nice work on using hair to demonstrate motion. I'm looking forward to the next chapte...
by jabbers
Sun Nov 11, 2018 9:35 pm
Forum: Amazon Redemption
Topic: "Amazon Redemption" part 18
Replies: 1
Views: 55

Re: "Amazon Redemption" part 18

I really enjoyed the pace of this chapter, finally revealing a surprising twist while establishing anticipation for the next chapter and what else might be revealed next. The narrative flowed! The variety of lighting and camera angles in this chapter were a nice addition to the visual texture and de...
by jabbers
Sun Nov 11, 2018 9:22 pm
Forum: Making Friends
Topic: "Making Friends" #34
Replies: 12
Views: 141

Re: "Making Friends" #34

I was underwhelmed by the events of this chapter but the bunny outfit is fun at least, even if the robot isn't my favorite design.
by jabbers
Sun Nov 11, 2018 9:19 pm
Forum: Nightmares and Realities
Topic: "Nightmares and Realities" #7
Replies: 7
Views: 96

Re: "Nightmares and Realities" #7

This chapter didn't offer much to hold my interest but I'm curious to see who this final subject will be and how this plot is revealed. The rendering work was nicely done!
by jabbers
Sun Nov 11, 2018 9:11 pm
Forum: Atlantis Reborn
Topic: "Atlantis Reborn" #12
Replies: 14
Views: 179

Re: "Atlantis Reborn" #12

I enjoyed the dynamic action in this chapter. Her use of a her newly gained power absorption abilities were really quite clever. The chapter ends on a nice cliffhanger that could setup something interesting and different. Looking forward to seeing where this goes!
by jabbers
Fri Nov 02, 2018 9:28 pm
Forum: Caught in the Headlights
Topic: "Caught in the Headlights" #35
Replies: 5
Views: 109

Re: "Caught in the Headlights" #35

As inexplicable as it began and brief as it was, the PP scene was entertaining. It seems as if the green glowing would have made more sense to explain how PP ended up in the situation but the scene played out in an amusing fashion and the smothering was an entertaining touch. Perhaps it was due to t...
by jabbers
Fri Nov 02, 2018 9:20 pm
Forum: Space Vixen
Topic: Member's Update: Space Vixen - Ellen Carter!
Replies: 11
Views: 184

Re: Member's Update: Space Vixen - Ellen Carter!

I'm a fan of this campy sci-fi setting and the premise of this space corps has a lot of potential for further adventures starring a variety of characters. The circuitry design was intricate and a nice change of visual flavor for the theme. Personally, I think their uniforms could use a little more i...
by jabbers
Fri Nov 02, 2018 9:09 pm
Forum: Metrobay One-Shots
Topic: Demon in the Machine
Replies: 8
Views: 203

Re: Demon in the Machine

It was nice visiting these characters and even briefly revisiting this story arc with a seasonal setting. I'm really looking forward to seeing a more formal continuation, especially after witnessing Crissy/Blackout in action. Fun short!
by jabbers
Fri Nov 02, 2018 8:55 pm
Forum: Heroines for Hire
Topic: "Heroines for Hire" #6
Replies: 10
Views: 268

Re: "Heroines for Hire" #6

Overall I love McTek's work, but I honestly wish there wouldn't be so many... gaps in the stories. I'm sure there's a reason for this that will become clear in the fullness of time, but it can be a bit frustrating at times. All too often the story will jump several months and then we get paragraphs...
by jabbers
Sun Oct 21, 2018 6:51 pm
Forum: Nightmares and Realities
Topic: "Nightmares and Realities" #6
Replies: 2
Views: 115

Re: "Nightmares and Realities" #6

It's hard to say where this story is headed but I remain curious about it. Nice work on the facial expressions on page 12 and the material selection for the second skin. I wonder if the detail of the coverings will play a significant role.
by jabbers
Sun Oct 21, 2018 6:46 pm
Forum: Benefits Package
Topic: "Benefits Package" Issue 3
Replies: 8
Views: 199

Re: "Benefits Package" Issue 3

Wow, this chapter has a number of surprising and exciting developments! I welcome this entertaining turn of events, exploring some fresh ideas with an interesting twist. It will be fun to see how this story connects with any of the other story arcs. The reveal at the end was very surprising but it s...
by jabbers
Sun Oct 21, 2018 6:35 pm
Forum: Robolegs
Topic: "Robolegs" #7 (finale)
Replies: 10
Views: 170

Re: "Robolegs" #7 (finale)

Though not massively eventful, as an introduction to its characters and its premise, I applaud the brevity and scope of this 'tight' vignette. It had just the right amount of ambition and the art was nicely rendered. The dynamic of the creator also being a user is an interesting one that could add s...
by jabbers
Fri Oct 12, 2018 1:50 am
Forum: Atlantis Reborn
Topic: "Atlantis Reborn" Chapter 11
Replies: 6
Views: 164

Re: "Atlantis Reborn" Chapter 11

Hmm, a Rogue-inspired reinvention, perhaps? That could be very interesting. The mysterious helper remains intriguing though I hope this is not the end of a brief cameo and that we learn more about her motivations, etc. Looking forward to seeing how things are resolved.
by jabbers
Fri Oct 12, 2018 1:42 am
Forum: Caught in the Headlights
Topic: "Caught in the Headlights" #34
Replies: 9
Views: 215

Re: "Caught in the Headlights" #34

Kaitlin looks super cute in this dress :3 Though I wonder why later as Pink Pussycat she didn't used her super strength to break free from robots? It's clear that her kitty collar is still on her. That's a great question. Maybe she underestimated the strength of the two robots? To be honest, I was ...
by jabbers
Mon Oct 08, 2018 10:28 pm
Forum: Making Friends
Topic: "Making Friends" #32
Replies: 11
Views: 211

Re: "Making Friends" #32

In some ways, this chapter felt a bit uneventful in its inevitability. I do wonder if her state of awareness might lead to something surprising in the next chapter. I remain curious about Jill's intentions and I hope they are revealed soon.
by jabbers
Mon Oct 08, 2018 10:19 pm
Forum: Nightmares and Realities
Topic: "Nightmares and Realities" #5
Replies: 5
Views: 127

Re: "Nightmares and Realities" #5

An intriguing reveal of a classic sci-fi setting with some good potential for entertaining character reinterpretations. Sounds like fun!
by jabbers
Mon Oct 08, 2018 10:08 pm
Forum: Robolegs
Topic: "Robolegs" #6
Replies: 11
Views: 198

Re: "Robolegs" #6

I still find myself curious about what this story is about. Their tights are rendered well! I agree. Creativeguy did a great job on them. This is my attempt a pantyhose fetish story, but with some techno/mind control flair. Any feedback would be greatly appreciated. It's a fun premise that's defini...
by jabbers
Mon Oct 08, 2018 9:56 pm
Forum: Amazon Redemption
Topic: "Amazon Redemption" part 17
Replies: 9
Views: 274

Re: "Amazon Redemption" part 17

It's always darkest before the dawn and we haven't reached that point yet. :twisted: Well that's good to hear! I can't really give away too much about Freedom Girl/Paula but, I can say we will see more of Skank in up 'cumming' updates down the road. Many things are and will be affected in the this ...

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