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by jabbers
Sun Feb 17, 2019 4:00 pm
Forum: Latex Asylum
Topic: Members Update - Latex Asylum part 9
Replies: 2
Views: 37

Re: Members Update - Latex Asylum part 9

Another entertaining chapter! Their technique for finally overcoming resistance was an amusing touch. The way focus gets shifted at chapter's end was a nicely done transition, doing an excellent job of setting the stage for the next chapter. Looking forward to it!
by jabbers
Sun Feb 17, 2019 3:52 pm
Forum: Military Machine
Topic: "Military Machine" #10
Replies: 2
Views: 53

Re: "Military Machine" #10

I don't really have too much to add about this chapter. The brief glimpse was a nice way to open the chapter while giving us a little more sense of how things have drastically changed for the character. There's some interesting intrigue with Indeks but I wonder if it will end up playing a meaningful...
by jabbers
Sat Feb 16, 2019 5:06 pm
Forum: Questions and Answers
Topic: Dickgirls?
Replies: 16
Views: 173

Re: Dickgirls?

It would be similar to the Conan style... but focus on erotica instead of violence. The futa sorceress would be the unique futa dickgirl mainly. My quandary was... men seem brutal when having 'unwilling' sex scenes with heroine captives. Would a woman with a dick doing the same thing come off as le...
by jabbers
Sat Feb 16, 2019 5:01 pm
Forum: Questions and Answers
Topic: Dickgirls?
Replies: 16
Views: 173

Re: Dickgirls?

Not really my cup of tea. As another has pointed out, it can be done to an extreme that I personally find actively unappealing. Otherwise, it is just a more specific variation of a prosthetic. Personally, it adds nothing new to a scenario except an increased risk of me wanting to skip past it.
by jabbers
Sat Feb 16, 2019 4:51 pm
Forum: Covers, Promos, and Teasers
Topic: The Update Plan for this coming week
Replies: 15
Views: 219

Re: The Update Plan for this coming week

I generally discourage requests primarily because they tend to be narrowly focused on things aimed at the requester and their subset of the audience. I'd much rather Fin's time be spent on his own stories, interests, and chosen collaborations. That's what I signed up for.
by jabbers
Sat Feb 16, 2019 4:42 pm
Forum: Questions and Answers
Topic: 2019 Story preference Poll
Replies: 8
Views: 161

Re: 2019 Story preference Poll

I didn't submit votes because I had a hard time sorting my opinions into the categories provided. If it were possible, I think it would be valuable to survey the interest level of specific elements instead of just a single vote. There are some elements that really dissuade me while others are fine i...
by jabbers
Thu Jan 31, 2019 2:40 am
Forum: Metrobay One-Shots
Topic: "Throbbing: A W.O.M.A.N. Prequel"
Replies: 7
Views: 95

Re: "Throbbing: A W.O.M.A.N. Prequel"

Yeah, this looks like the beginning of an interesting new plot line. Is the revitalization they're talking about the original rationale for Metrobay physique or are they referring to something else? In any case, this new character is quite interesting and the prospect of creating a new team is intri...
by jabbers
Thu Jan 31, 2019 2:25 am
Forum: Nightmares and Realities
Topic: "Nightmares and Realities" #10
Replies: 3
Views: 38

Re: "Nightmares and Realities" #10

Yeah, I can't tell if his repetition is a mistake or meaningful. I appreciated the material shine on Omega, that was nicely done. I still have no idea where this is going but it's nice to see some more familiar faces and a different setting. Something tells me he has some tricks up his sleeve especi...
by jabbers
Thu Jan 31, 2019 2:01 am
Forum: Caught in the Headlights
Topic: "Caught in the Headlights" #37
Replies: 3
Views: 37

Re: "Caught in the Headlights" #37

Welcome back. The turnabout in this chapter was nicely done. I was disappointed at first by how overpowered that glow seems to be but it led to some brief amusement before the somewhat convenient twist. It was a nice play on my expectations, even if it relies on how predictably these scenes can some...
by jabbers
Thu Jan 31, 2019 1:46 am
Forum: Heroines for Hire
Topic: "Heroines for Hire" #9
Replies: 3
Views: 144

Re: "Heroines for Hire" #9

Vanishing Girl (that's her right?) is rendered quite well! I'm not a huge fan of the doll aesthetic but it's theme appropriate and the costumes are still fun. I'm curious to find out what business they have and with him and her. I appreciate the fact that these characters are out actually doing some...
by jabbers
Thu Jan 31, 2019 1:35 am
Forum: Myrrh of the Mynx
Topic: Members Update - Myrrh of the Mynx part 10 !!
Replies: 5
Views: 121

Re: Members Update - Myrrh of the Mynx part 10 !!

Finally got around to seeing this now that the site is back up. Cleo looks great in this chapter but she doesn't get to do much more than wander through the tomb. I'm looking forward to a little more excitement in the next installment. It should be fun.
by jabbers
Thu Jan 17, 2019 1:15 am
Forum: Payback's a Bitch
Topic: Payback's a Bitch #9
Replies: 19
Views: 300

Re: Payback's a Bitch #9

I enjoyed the campy dialogue in this chapter with some really entertaining dramatic action heading toward its conclusion. It was a great cliffhanger to set the stage for the next exciting chapter of a story that has been really great. It remains one of my favorite current running stories on the site...
by jabbers
Mon Jan 14, 2019 6:49 am
Forum: Making Friends
Topic: "Making Friends" #38 (epilogue 3)
Replies: 10
Views: 195

Re: "Making Friends" #38 (epilogue 3)

It was long indeed but congrats on finishing (again)! Even though she seems like a substitute Crissy on the surface, Jill is an interesting character because of her relationships and her personality. I've mentioned elsewhere (in the Permanence thread) that I have a hard time understanding the charac...
by jabbers
Mon Jan 14, 2019 6:12 am
Forum: Space Vixen
Topic: Members Update - Space Vixen: Ellen Carter 2
Replies: 10
Views: 146

Re: Members Update - Space Vixen: Ellen Carter 2

I've been enjoying the space setting and especially the Space Vixen concept in this story. The uniforms, alien design, and even blondie's hair are all well done and thematically appropriate. I appreciate the use of the circuitry as a visual indicator of control. Not only is it visually unique, it's ...
by jabbers
Mon Jan 14, 2019 5:36 am
Forum: Questions and Answers
Topic: Thoughts on Permanence
Replies: 25
Views: 615

Re: Thoughts on Permanence

I'm always torn when the topic of permanence is brought up. On one hand it's a topic i give a lot of thought to (perhaps too much), but whenever the topic comes up my opinion always seems to be in the minority. Ah whatever, I'll just go ahead and give my 2 cents. I personally love it when enslaveme...
by jabbers
Sat Jan 12, 2019 5:58 am
Forum: Turing Point and Chymistra
Topic: "Turing Point" #9
Replies: 3
Views: 57

Re: "Turing Point" #9

This story remains a mystery to me so it has been difficult to stay invested. I can't say I enjoy the pink look. Regardless, the puppy moment was quite amusing while it lasted.
by jabbers
Sat Jan 12, 2019 5:49 am
Forum: Latex Asylum
Topic: Three Members Updates added!
Replies: 7
Views: 143

Re: Three Members Updates added!

This was a good chapter! Seeing VW's preparation and defiance did an excellent job of heightening the tension for what's to come. Even the removal of the suit added to the atmosphere. I appreciated the detail of it crumpled on the floor and how well it was rendered! While it is quite amusing and I'm...
by jabbers
Sat Jan 12, 2019 5:31 am
Forum: Play Nice
Topic: Three Members Updates added!
Replies: 9
Views: 141

Re: Three Members Updates added!

This was a fun chapter. White Mouse's design was very well done from her hair, her outfit and its polka dot accessories, to her face and its beauty mark. Her playmate was right to be impressed with her sans hood! The dolphin big toy was an amusing contraption too. I look forward to seeing what await...
by jabbers
Sat Jan 12, 2019 5:20 am
Forum: Night of the Vorcubi
Topic: Three Members Updates added!
Replies: 6
Views: 99

Re: Three Members Updates added!

An entertaining chapter, if a bit brief in its events. Allowing the nectar to increase urges without completely taking over is a great way to introduce some inner conflict that heightens the atmosphere. I enjoyed Lavender's dramatic reveal, her positioning and outfit well rendered. It seems there's ...
by jabbers
Sat Jan 12, 2019 5:08 am
Forum: Military Machine
Topic: "Military Machine" #9
Replies: 12
Views: 249

Re: "Military Machine" #9

I don't think I've mentioned how much I've enjoyed the Countess's character and design, highlighted nicely in several scenes of this chapter. She's a great character who I hope we'll see again in the future. While I've taken issue with the cybersuit designs, it feels like both of them have some attr...

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