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by jabbers
Mon Sep 17, 2018 1:27 am
Forum: Military Machine
Topic: "Military Machine" #5
Replies: 10
Views: 142

Re: "Military Machine" #5

This was some pretty cool bits of story in this chapter. The turnabout was well done and it was nice seeing the backstory play out in a manner that relies on the use of powers. Now that both sides have played their hands and the stage is set for a fight, the stakes are high and the next chapter seem...
by jabbers
Mon Sep 17, 2018 1:21 am
Forum: Atlantis Reborn
Topic: "Atlantis Reborn" #10
Replies: 8
Views: 165

Re: "Atlantis Reborn" #10

Some really intriguing developments in this chapter regarding the box and the mystery lady but sadly mere hints and teases at some story threads. I'm curious to see if the dream sequence actually ends up contributing to the plot or if it is mostly fan service. I remain excited to find out more so I ...
by jabbers
Mon Sep 17, 2018 1:05 am
Forum: Suffering Suffragettes
Topic: Members update - Suffering Suffragettes part 6 !!
Replies: 7
Views: 137

Re: Members update - Suffering Suffragettes part 6 !!

I thought this was a pretty clever origin, certainly one that I wasn't expecting! (I figured relatives.) The way that it both resolves the heroine's situation in the story along with revealing a character origin was quite well crafted. Nicely done and great story! I hope you get to follow through wi...
by jabbers
Mon Sep 17, 2018 12:51 am
Forum: Heroines for Hire
Topic: "Heroines for Hire" #4
Replies: 8
Views: 174

Re: "Heroines for Hire" #4

This chapter included some interesting developments regarding Payback. The story continues to keep me curious about where it is leading. I have to add myself to the chorus of the confused, especially in the last half of the chapter. I had to look up Virtua in the wiki and I'm still not sure I have a...
by jabbers
Thu Sep 06, 2018 1:46 am
Forum: Payback's a Bitch
Topic: "Payback's a Bitch" #8
Replies: 15
Views: 186

Re: "Payback's a Bitch" #8

The artwork has been excellent and the storytelling well executed! It's been a lot of fun following along with this story as it has depicted some pivotal moments of Nightengale lore. Now that the narrative is returning to the present, I'm excited to see where all of this leads. Now that Nightengale ...
by jabbers
Wed Sep 05, 2018 1:33 am
Forum: Caught in the Headlights
Topic: "Caught in the Headlights" #33
Replies: 2
Views: 56

Re: "Caught in the Headlights" #33

Now that the call has gone out, it looks like we're approaching an exciting climax. Seeing the montage of characters (carefully selected, it appears) reminded me that PP was ostensibly accompanying them undercover but has been curiously absent. Is she going to re-emerge? I'm also curious about why G...
by jabbers
Wed Sep 05, 2018 1:07 am
Forum: Talk Dirty To Me
Topic: "Talk Dirty To Me" #2
Replies: 7
Views: 110

Re: "Talk Dirty To Me" #2

I enjoyed this short for its light-hearted and humorous tone. I never really took notice before how her color scheme seems to match the same red and black of a certain mouthy comic book character also known for breaking the fourth wall. It seems like her personality is similarly inspired as well. Fu...
by jabbers
Wed Sep 05, 2018 1:01 am
Forum: Myrrh of the Mynx
Topic: Members Update - Myrrh of the Mynx part 9 !!
Replies: 13
Views: 169

Re: Members Update - Myrrh of the Mynx part 9 !!

I was pleasantly surprised by this chapter! As backstory, I was expecting it to be a bit more dry for some reason, but there was still some good action. The posing on page 153 and 154 were especially well done, certainly deserving of the extra bonus. It will be fun to see how things unfold. Nice job!
by jabbers
Thu Aug 30, 2018 11:17 pm
Forum: Making Friends
Topic: "Making Friends" #30
Replies: 2
Views: 91

Re: "Making Friends" #30

This turned out to be a more interesting process than I was expecting! I welcome this sort of hybrid MC approach and definitely appreciate that it allows for some semblance of personality to remain, allowing for some more colorful dialogue and action. It'd be fun to see this or similar approaches pr...
by jabbers
Thu Aug 30, 2018 10:56 pm
Forum: Amazon Redemption
Topic: "Amazon Redemption" part 16
Replies: 16
Views: 367

Re: "Amazon Redemption" part 16

It's actually something I've noticed that both Dumbtime and MCTek tell narratively dense stories but they have almost entirely opposite tendencies that can make their story telling pretty confusing and difficult to follow. Dumbtime tends to dwell on scenes over several chapters in order to portray a...
by jabbers
Sun Aug 26, 2018 3:40 am
Forum: Military Machine
Topic: "Military Machine" #4
Replies: 28
Views: 462

Re: "Military Machine" #4

This chapter was really enjoyable because of the assortment of scenes, mixing exposition with action of all varieties. The posing in these scenes were well choreographed. It was exciting to see the heroine face ups and downs, and though the final result was easily anticipated, it was well executed. ...
by jabbers
Tue Aug 21, 2018 5:50 am
Forum: The Drone Agenda - Graybot Hotel
Topic: "The Drone Agenda - Graybot Hotel" #5 (finale)
Replies: 11
Views: 206

Re: "The Drone Agenda - Graybot Hotel" #5 (finale)

I appreciated the character designs of the final three converts, especially in comparison to their more heavily endowed counterparts. The camera angles and posing were well done in the scenes involving the trio and the glimpse of the guest's conversion. In some ways, this story demonstrates some of ...
by jabbers
Tue Aug 21, 2018 3:38 am
Forum: Amazon Redemption
Topic: "Amazon Redemption" part 16
Replies: 16
Views: 367

Re: "Amazon Redemption" part 16

I find myself confused by what is being revealed here. So the Amazons are being manipulated by a goddess to worship her, presumably with the queen's help, but to what end? I believe it has been hinted at in other stories but has it already been portrayed/explained? Is this the same goddess that appe...
by jabbers
Tue Aug 21, 2018 3:12 am
Forum: Atlantis Reborn
Topic: "Atlantis Reborn" #9
Replies: 5
Views: 184

Re: "Atlantis Reborn" #9

The vintage character appearances continue to impress in this chapter. GG's part seemed like a particularly tragic means to demonstrate his callousness. Still, his motivations feel a bit murky and confused for the lengths he's been willing to go, but perhaps that's the point. Nevertheless, I'm curio...
by jabbers
Tue Aug 21, 2018 2:17 am
Forum: Making Friends
Topic: "Making Friends" #29
Replies: 5
Views: 167

Re: "Making Friends" #29

I appreciate the pacing and structure of this chapter. By abbreviating the process itself, the mysterious result was gradually revealed in a dramatic fashion. Interesting that essentially the old Ringmistress style copy process is now more common (outside of the skin). I'm guessing it's also the rem...
by jabbers
Tue Aug 21, 2018 1:54 am
Forum: Talk Dirty To Me
Topic: "Talk Dirty To Me" #1
Replies: 8
Views: 195

Re: "Talk Dirty To Me" #1

This is a pretty amusing story so far. I'm curious to see what develops of this newer peculiar character and the curse is a fun and refreshing take on the usual. Her attempts to resist while she let her ambition get the better of her kept things interesting and entertaining.
by jabbers
Sat Aug 11, 2018 6:43 pm
Forum: Caught in the Headlights
Topic: "Caught in the Headlights" #32
Replies: 6
Views: 161

Re: "Caught in the Headlights" #32

Viv's penchant for dirty talk was amusing and the accidental way they manage stall for time is clever. It does seem strange that she administers a warning in this situation though. Both Galatea and now this loophole feel a bit too convenient, especially given how much Cyber's technical prowess has ...
by jabbers
Sat Aug 11, 2018 1:41 am
Forum: Latex Asylum
Topic: We Haven't forgotten this series
Replies: 6
Views: 233

Re: We Haven't forgotten this series

I look forward to it! Love Nest is nearly done and Payback seems close too. I'd guess Myrrh is nearing its midpoint. Are Play Nice, Outcasts, and Mythica on indefinite hiatus?
by jabbers
Sat Aug 11, 2018 1:23 am
Forum: Love Nest
Topic: Members Gallery update - Love Nest part 38 !!
Replies: 7
Views: 196

Re: Members Gallery update - Love Nest part 38 !!

It's amusing that even as they make a hurried escape, they've still thought to arrange such a predicament. Even as this story reaches its conclusion, it maintains an exciting pace. Hopefully there won't be too many loose threads at the end. I'm looking forward to seeing poor Goldwing return to form ...
by jabbers
Sat Aug 11, 2018 1:11 am
Forum: Benefits Package
Topic: "Benefits Package" Issue 1
Replies: 7
Views: 241

Re: "Benefits Package" Issue 1

Though I'm a little lost in terms of which previous encounter they're referencing, this is an interesting start and a great cliffhanger of an ending. Though not malicious in motive, I can see how this lapse of judgment might lead to larger consequences. Given her character, I can see her compounding...

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