Search found 549 matches

by jabbers
Thu Apr 04, 2019 3:08 am
Forum: Covers, Promos, and Teasers
Topic: New Approach for Finister Collaborations
Replies: 15
Views: 942

Re: New Approach for Finister Collaborations

Yeah, I share this concern. It was what I was alluding to in my earlier post. While there is no shortage of MC/TF/bot stories, Finister is the only bondage-oriented artist/writer on the site. Between collaborations, Finister's own brand of story content seems sporadic and regularly diluted by the n...
by jabbers
Wed Apr 03, 2019 11:59 pm
Forum: Nightmares and Realities
Topic: "Nightmares and Realities" #11 (finale)
Replies: 18
Views: 551

Re: "Nightmares and Realities" #11 (finale)

I'd venture to say that this story leaves almost all questions unanswered save for how Carthax got there and how he manages to return. If he had the power to transport test subjects back and forth, why not himself? Why did he need DD? The conclusion feels unearned as it seems like mere coincidence ...
by jabbers
Wed Apr 03, 2019 3:34 am
Forum: Covers, Promos, and Teasers
Topic: New Approach for Finister Collaborations
Replies: 15
Views: 942

Re: New Approach for Finister Collaborations

Yeah, I share this concern. It was what I was alluding to in my earlier post. While there is no shortage of MC/TF/bot stories, Finister is the only bondage-oriented artist/writer on the site. Between collaborations, Finister's own brand of story content seems sporadic and regularly diluted by the n...
by jabbers
Wed Apr 03, 2019 3:08 am
Forum: Covers, Promos, and Teasers
Topic: New Approach for Finister Collaborations
Replies: 15
Views: 942

Re: New Approach for Finister Collaborations

Yeah, I share this concern. It was what I was alluding to in my earlier post. While there is no shortage of MC/TF/bot stories, Finister is the only bondage-oriented artist/writer on the site. Between collaborations, Finister's own brand of story content seems sporadic and regularly diluted by the ne...
by jabbers
Fri Mar 29, 2019 4:17 am
Forum: The Second Date
Topic: "The Second Date" #2
Replies: 15
Views: 525

Re: "The Second Date" #2

It's hard to decipher GW's facial expression after being offered the invitation. Is she suspicious of Beate's secrecy or is she merely amused by the prospect of glimpsing into GG's personal life? I agree with the others, I'm intrigued by how the usually powerful GG gets outmatched. The display stand...
by jabbers
Fri Mar 29, 2019 3:49 am
Forum: Caught in the Headlights
Topic: "Caught in the Headlights" #39
Replies: 14
Views: 485

Re: "Caught in the Headlights" #39

Not sure if this was a continuity error but Carla was being controlled through her earpiece this whole time, right? She's not wearing one on pages 730 and 732. I do find it curious that they were able to excuse her participation without identifying the headsets as the control method, thereby discove...
by jabbers
Fri Mar 29, 2019 3:24 am
Forum: Payback's a Bitch
Topic: Payback's a Bitch #10
Replies: 5
Views: 314

Re: Payback's a Bitch #10

A rather unexpected turn and a great cliffhanger to end on! Still quite enjoying this story and quite excited to see what happens next after this development.
by jabbers
Fri Mar 29, 2019 3:21 am
Forum: Nightmares and Realities
Topic: "Nightmares and Realities" #11 (finale)
Replies: 18
Views: 551

Re: "Nightmares and Realities" #11 (finale)

I'd venture to say that this story leaves almost all questions unanswered save for how Carthax got there and how he manages to return. If he had the power to transport test subjects back and forth, why not himself? Why did he need DD? The conclusion feels unearned as it seems like mere coincidence t...
by jabbers
Fri Mar 22, 2019 5:53 am
Forum: Caught in the Headlights
Topic: "Caught in the Headlights" #38
Replies: 4
Views: 176

Re: "Caught in the Headlights" #38

I appreciated the way Honey was able to resolve her confrontation. It was a nice character appropriate moment of brains over brawn. This story has had its share of amusing moments and I look forward to more in the last couple chapters. To reiterate a point I've made earlier, I find the dramatic tens...
by jabbers
Fri Mar 22, 2019 4:39 am
Forum: Space Vixen
Topic: Members Update - Space Vixen: Ellen Carter 3
Replies: 7
Views: 375

Re: Members Update - Space Vixen: Ellen Carter 3

The 'programming' procedure was quite an amusing concept. The post-hypnotic state is also an interesting concept that has been underutilized on the site but it is applied with nice dramatic effect for this cliffhanger conclusion. It did seem a little strange that the rest of the crew seemed to be in...
by jabbers
Fri Mar 22, 2019 4:26 am
Forum: Military Machine
Topic: "Military Machine" #12
Replies: 7
Views: 266

Re: "Military Machine" #12

Very nice job rendering the removal on page 209! For some reason, the pupils on page 215 were a bit on the disturbing side though. The moment of lucidity is an intriguing detail to include, I wonder if it might be a hint at some further reaching consequences to these events. In any case, I remain ex...
by jabbers
Fri Mar 22, 2019 3:57 am
Forum: Heroines for Hire
Topic: "Heroines for Hire" #11
Replies: 24
Views: 668

Re: "Heroines for Hire" #11

In Takeover, it was implied that Des had more to offer than just her connection to ShadowRider, that she is an information broker. (Was this revealed prior?) It seems like this is an important reason why she was targeted and perhaps the rationale for the form she takes in this chapter. Some sort of ...
by jabbers
Fri Mar 22, 2019 3:25 am
Forum: Questions and Answers
Topic: Insectoid Group project *****SPOILERS*****
Replies: 98
Views: 2944

Re: Insectoid Group project *****SPOILERS*****

I share the concern over exploding the story. Of the two options, I suggest option A. Ultimately, I think you should act as editor of suggestion with the freedom as writer/artist to interpret ideas as you desire and without obligation to include any particular requests. If requests or suggestions ca...
by jabbers
Fri Mar 22, 2019 1:51 am
Forum: Covers, Promos, and Teasers
Topic: New Approach for Finister Collaborations
Replies: 15
Views: 942

Re: New Approach for Finister Collaborations

Yeah, I was thinking that too. I'm working on about 10 series. Five of those stories are nearing their end. So, I was thinking of not doing so many projects after those 5 finish, so then ongoing stories could be updated more frequently. Before then though I will try to crank out more updates. More ...
by jabbers
Fri Mar 15, 2019 8:33 pm
Forum: Mystica Awakening
Topic: Members Update - Mystica Awakening part 6 !!
Replies: 4
Views: 224

Re: Members Update - Mystica Awakening part 6 !!

Though the artwork is great, I also found some of the events in this chapter a little difficult to follow. It could be due to how long it's been since the last chapter but I don't have a strong grasp on her goals, her abilities, and how they work, despite the exposition to explain some of it. Perhap...
by jabbers
Fri Mar 15, 2019 8:17 pm
Forum: The Second Date
Topic: "The Second Date" #1
Replies: 9
Views: 374

Re: "The Second Date" #1

Welcome back! Nice start to the story. I enjoyed the creative use of her unique powers and the sweater dress was a nice selection to demonstrate bookish yet flirty. I've long appreciated your artistic interpretation of GG and MsM and this chapter is no exception. I have no idea where this story migh...
by jabbers
Fri Mar 15, 2019 7:55 pm
Forum: Questions and Answers
Topic: Insect Infestation
Replies: 14
Views: 570

Re: Insect Infestation

Truthfully, this sounds like it could become a 'too many cooks' situation that makes me skeptical. Brainstorming a high-level premise is one thing but it might be a struggle to try to accommodate every single pet scenario that is volunteered. It's admirable to take suggestions but I recommend you wr...
by jabbers
Fri Mar 15, 2019 7:47 pm
Forum: Questions and Answers
Topic: Just curious. Ever thought things went too far?
Replies: 46
Views: 1969

Re: Just curious. Ever thought things went too far?

I think the catch 22 in our erotica sphere here is most of us seek to explore fantasies where a fictional desired heroine is coerced by mind control or bondage to either love the fictional one who adores her... or to become the sexual object used for their pleasure. There's readers who fantasize be...
by jabbers
Fri Mar 15, 2019 7:34 pm
Forum: Questions and Answers
Topic: Just curious. Ever thought things went too far?
Replies: 46
Views: 1969

Re: Just curious. Ever thought things went too far?

@jabbers I see what you're talking about as something that will just result in an eternal "peril dance" where nothing is ever really resolved. Basic narrative structure indicates that you have to build tension, and then resolve that tension... perhaps I'm misunderstanding you but it seems...
by jabbers
Tue Mar 12, 2019 1:57 am
Forum: Questions and Answers
Topic: Just curious. Ever thought things went too far?
Replies: 46
Views: 1969

Re: Just curious. Ever thought things went too far?

I think the catch 22 in our erotica sphere here is most of us seek to explore fantasies where a fictional desired heroine is coerced by mind control or bondage to either love the fictional one who adores her... or to become the sexual object used for their pleasure. There's readers who fantasize be...

Go to advanced search