Wow. Lotta discussion on this chapter. Well, a lot for one of mine.
@TheAngelicOne - I'm glad you liked the bimbofication! This one came together nicely and pretty much turned out the way I hoped it would. As for Pink Pussycat & Kitten, the bottom line was that they'll get rescued and be back to their normal activities in no time. The little romp with Maivettka Literist (someone's gotta get that joke

) is one of those side story threads that isn't really part of this main story so it's destined for a one shot spin off (like many other threads in this story). So hang in there! I'm trying really hard not to take this one off the rails so close to the end.
@bassrass1 - Thanks on Hunkbot. That was pure fun! There's 1 chapter left. 1 very big chapter. But it's the culmination of Lactatia's plan and I hope it's at least a tiny bit surprising.
@ajiehb - This chapter's for you! As for Nightengale getting fooled, I purposely left it a tiny bit vague. This chapter I wanted to use the classic superhero rescue theme and combine it with fin's earlier work with NG. So it's not totally important how she arrives and there could be any number of circumstances that leads to it, kind of like how superhero stories are constantly reinterpreted. But the circumstances I had in my head while writing it was that NG actually did go to Max out of desperation but Max was too distracted with Vivian being the avatar of greed to be the classic Max that he is. So he let NG find PP and planed to later on catch the two of them. Since this is all a lot of moving pieces around I kind of shortened it to one page so I could get to the sexy much faster.
You are correct, Maivettka Literist (still funny) is just a normal metrobay citizen who was turned into something like a supervillain sleeper agent. I'm really glad you picked up on the wig. I wanted it to give the impression that it was odd then make sense when she reveals it's a wig. I'm really glad you picked up on the details, cause I put a bunch in there.
Because I went with the narration style for this chapter, we only see Nightengale's thoughts as she slowly sinks into bimbofication. The one drawback was, in order to stay consistent, I couldn't use thought bubbles for anyone else. I guess writing is all about choices.
The #1 thing I wanted to do, more than tell a chapter in Lactatia's story, was to stay true to Nightengale so fans of the character can enjoy her in this story. Fin created an amazing character and the last thing I wanted to do was come in and muck it up. Writer's will always have their own take on a character and it'll never be 100% like the original, but I wanted to highlight the important things that you mentioned which define her. And again, I was really just trying to pay homage to fin's stories.
The mask I actually went back and forth on, until I figured that completely naked means completely naked.
Next chapter will have all the answers that I've been building towards since chapter 1.
@alfredenewman - No love for Hunkbot? --- I n i t i a t i n g s a d n e s s p r o t o c o l s - someday Hunkbot will be a real boy.
@jabbers - If anything, I do try to add something to the stories for people who aren't totally into the main featured fetish. So if bimbo TF isn't your thing or the excessively curvy bodies doesn't do it, I'm glad you were still able to enjoy parts of this chapter. Using PP & Kitten helped on several levels. Their connection to NG, their creations of fin, and their bodies are not that exaggerated which helps to offset the bimbo body. (I also tried to make Strangetamer less curvy than I normally make characters)
@champ - and really this is for everyone... thank you for enjoying (and sticking with this story for so long). The last chapter will hopefully be something special.