"The Drone Agenda - Graybot Hotel" #2

Story by Doctor Robo, art by Seg, postwork by Trishbot.
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"The Drone Agenda - Graybot Hotel" #2

Postby Doctor Robo » Sun Feb 11, 2018 11:56 pm

Hey Metrobay fans! Seg, Trishbot, and Doctor Robo are back this week with chapter 2 of "Graybot Hotel", and you can read it right now in the members gallery of MetrobayComix.com!

Joanne's domineering boss Amy has called the young maid down to the laundry room for a one-on-one meeting. But what Joanne doesn't realize is the meeting will be between her curvaceous body and Amy's eager hands!

Link to members gallery: http://metrobaycomix.com/members/gal/in ... ot-Hotel-2

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Re: "The Drone Agenda - Graybot Hotel" #2

Postby seg » Thu Feb 15, 2018 11:58 am

Since this is new to me, I'm not above asking for critique. I have moderately, tough skin for criticism. 8-)

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Re: "The Drone Agenda - Graybot Hotel" #2

Postby lods » Fri Feb 16, 2018 5:18 pm

The lighting was a bit high contrast making it hard to see what was going on at points (like page 36). Otherwise not bad.

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Re: "The Drone Agenda - Graybot Hotel" #2

Postby seg » Fri Feb 16, 2018 11:15 pm

Thanks, you're right. I won't attempt that "white out" displayed on page 36 ever again, unless I'm trying to blind the subjects.


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