"Military Machine" #2

Story by Doctor Robo, art by Trishbot.
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"Military Machine" #2

Postby Doctor Robo » Wed Jun 27, 2018 10:30 pm

Hey Metrobay fans! Trishbot and Doctor Robo are back this week with chapter 2 of "Military Machine", and you can read it right now in the members gallery of MetrobayComix.com!

After receiving General Longcannon's orders, Brown Sugar reluctantly reports to her old Army base. However, find things aren't quite the same as she remembers...

Link to members gallery: http://metrobaycomix.com/members/gal/in ... -Machine-2

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Re: "Military Machine" #2

Postby Softsubversion » Thu Jun 28, 2018 9:01 pm

Chapter two picks up and gets even better than chapter one. This story is really interesting.

Funny seeing Longcannon and the army in arrears to Index. I wonder if him sending Coco to the fort is part of Longcannon's schemes with Index or something else entirely.

Also interesting to learn some more backround on Brown Sugar and her life in the army and with her commando friends. Though looks like Longcannon has changed her old friends perspective on things.

What kind of "dirty" work does he have in mind for the reassembled team? This is obviously for personal profit but is it also part of paying Index back the money owed?

And of course the return of good old Digitalis and his new mind control combat suit. Although it looks likes hes already done a pretty good job scrambling the teams brains already to new desires in league with Longcannon. This guy is always just no good.

Speaking of Longcannons, wow, Index must have used some of his super tech for penis enhancement. Or maybe he was a porn star before he became an industrial magnate and super villain.

This story can go all kinds of ways. Great job Robo and Trishbot.

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Re: "Military Machine" #2

Postby Softsubversion » Fri Jun 29, 2018 5:35 pm

The very hot commando team looks very fit under their uniforms and they would have to be in that line of work. But they should probably be lined up for a full body inspection just to make sure they are ready for the hard duties planned for them. And of course girls that young and healthy would also some stimulation between them, perhaps an orgy or two or some fun with others to blow off some steam so they are mentally ready too. All work and no play......

Wonder if Index knows whats going on there or are Longcannonn and Digitalis going behind his back with their own little side operation?

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Re: "Military Machine" #2

Postby Softsubversion » Fri Jun 29, 2018 5:48 pm

Oh yeah, one other thing I noticed, the Captain's eyes. They were either kind of sleepy looking or hard looking depending on the situation. You could tell something was off with her even before we found out she under others control. Those little touches like that are really good and not every one does it. Great job there.

Also, there is a hierarchy with the commando slaves as the pretty Captain was giving orders to the others to subdue Brown Sugar and they jumped right to it with Yes Ma'am! A first among equal slave so to speak. Does she take advantage of that with them in private too? How warped has Digitalis made her and the others? What do they do when not on duty?

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Re: "Military Machine" #2

Postby Softsubversion » Sat Jun 30, 2018 2:25 am

Next up the Indoctrinator for Sugar. Looks like the other girls spend plenty of time in it too from how they look and act. Can't wait to see what's up with that.

And what about Digitalis new weapon suit for them? Shit. The specs on that thing we saw on the tablet in regard to mind control is crazy. As much as the Indoctrinator and perhaps their old gear has screwed with their minds, what's that thing going to do to them?

Lot of good stuff here with story and MC factor both. I like that idea of having this mind controlled army, I mean a real army type situation like here. It's a pretty original idea that has not been explored that much in detail previously and is really a logical offshoot from mind control as in this story. The ways to abuse that control even further than just having loyal, fanatical soldiers by coupling it for personal pleasure and profit and all kinds of things is a logical extension of that too.

Let's see where all these things go. A lot to work with here as far as the multifaceted plot so far. This can be really good.

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Re: "Military Machine" #2

Postby Softsubversion » Sun Jul 01, 2018 1:53 am

Doc,

What was up with Brandy, Gin and Brewer? Were you in the mood to get loaded when writing that?

Great scene there where Longcannon was telling the Captain that he will make tons of money selling her and the other comando's services to others right to her face. And she replies Yes Sir! Is there anything else I can do for you?

Shows how much control he has over her. Well done. Also love the sleepy eyes all the girls have. Also shows the control. You and Trish know how to put those little things in that really push a story above others.

You two make a great team.

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Re: "Military Machine" #2

Postby Doctor Robo » Sun Jul 01, 2018 1:48 pm

Hello Softsubversion!

I'm very happy to see how much you're enjoying the story. You have some great questions and observations! I'll try to scroll back and answer as many as I can here:

- I was a big fan of Trishbot's "Chain of Command" one-shot, so when we were brainstorming a new story to collaborate on I thought a sequel would be fun. We definitely wanted to expand upon the backstory of the Commandos and explore where they came from and what happened to them.

- We will definitely see the Commandos get a workout at some point in the near future. I can guarantee that.

- Great observation about Amelia. Trishbot did a fantastic job on her facial expressions - or lack thereof. It's clear something has happened to her. But what? And what could it mean for Brown Sugar?

- I think you're going to like the "Indoctrinator". I'm getting a preview of some of the pages for the next chapter and they are VERY interesting. :)

- Doc

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Re: "Military Machine" #2

Postby Softsubversion » Sun Jul 01, 2018 3:06 pm

Doc,

Thanks for the reply as always. I do love this story. So much going on with the commado's and Longcannons plans to farm them out for money work. Then you have Sugar and her predicament. I suspect she may have a change of heart about joining her old team. And of course the money Longcannon and the army owes Index and index sending his slave over to the fort. Then you have Digitalis with his new mind control suit. So many threads here and that's what I like about a lot of your stories including this one.

Yeah, I'm looking forward to see the indoctrinator work on Sugar and any or all the girls. Also to see what the Commando's do in their "down" time. I'm sure their programming is more inclusive than just fighting for their general. With their looks and those oh-so- fit, athletic and trained bodies they must have other activities and desires programmed into them.

And of course, what will Digitali's new suit do to all of them them? I suspect it will be used when Longcannon starts his money making adventures and having the girls do any mission the highest bidders want.Talk about a zombie machine from all that was said on that tablet.

Great art and story by you and Trishbot. Can't wait for the next episode.

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Re: "Military Machine" #2

Postby Softsubversion » Sun Jul 01, 2018 3:24 pm

Doc,

Thanks for the clue in on Chain of Command. I missed that one somehow. Gives some really good back story on what's going on. Amelia and Sugar were apparently very close back then bonded by shared experiences and danger. Her reaction to seeing Sugar was clear until Longcannon over rode it. I didn't know Sugar was in that group until your new story or how close she was with the Foxy Commandos and Amelia.

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Re: "Military Machine" #2

Postby Softsubversion » Sun Jul 01, 2018 4:28 pm

The other interesting thing the Chain of Command story revealed is there are at least two levels of control, one where Captain Applegate acted as though a normal person even though we know he has no free will then the stronger one Longcannon activated that really drilled her out.

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Re: "Military Machine" #2

Postby Softsubversion » Sun Jul 01, 2018 5:28 pm

Doc,

I like the fact that the team as shown by Emilia can operate while seeming to be normal women as needed. This would help on missions at times and also have them fool friends and family that they must have outside the army and of course would have to have contact with to keep up the facade. It makes it very realistic instead of them being zombies all the time. That would quickly lead to suspicion from those they know.

Also in reply to your post. I'm glad you will go over the back story of the Foxy Commando's, who they are, where they came from, how the team got started including with Sugar and what happened to them. Also wonder if Sugar's betrayal will be included. Or is the betrayal just something Longcannon programmed Applegate to feel. It's always more interesting when you know these people before they were controlled and who they are.

I really like the ideas you expressed for the future of the series and can't wait to see it all play out.

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Re: "Military Machine" #2

Postby Doctor Robo » Sun Jul 01, 2018 10:45 pm

Softsubversion wrote:Thanks for the clue in on Chain of Command. I missed that one somehow. Gives some really good back story on what's going on. Amelia and Sugar were apparently very close back then bonded by shared experiences and danger. Her reaction to seeing Sugar was clear until Longcannon over rode it. I didn't know Sugar was in that group until your new story or how close she was with the Foxy Commandos and Amelia.

No problem! It didn't occur to me that readers might not make the immediate connection to "Chain of Command", so I'm glad you mentioned it. Here's a link to the story in our members gallery archive in case anyone needs to read (or re-read) it:

http://metrobaycomix.com/members/gal/in ... of-Command

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Re: "Military Machine" #2

Postby jabbers » Wed Jul 04, 2018 4:51 am

I'm enjoying the direction of this story so far. The design of the suit is intricate, clunky in some areas and svelte in others. She was well posed even with all the mechanical attachments. Her facial expression on page 31 is nicely done.

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Re: "Military Machine" #2

Postby Doctor Robo » Wed Jul 04, 2018 7:03 pm

jabbers wrote:I'm enjoying the direction of this story so far. The design of the suit is intricate, clunky in some areas and svelte in others. She was well posed even with all the mechanical attachments. Her facial expression on page 31 is nicely done.

Thank you! The Afterburn suit design was all Trishbot, and I agree she did a great job on it. But just wait until you get a load of the Sexturion!!! :)

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Re: "Military Machine" #2

Postby Softsubversion » Wed Jul 04, 2018 8:42 pm

Robo,

Yeah,

I can't wait to see the Sexturian and what all that high powered mind control technology Digitalis was showing off does to those sexy, fit soldiers. Also can't wait to see what the Indoctrination does with them. The operative word here is wait, damn, that will be a very long wait because this story is just too good both in plot and MC content.

Jabbers,

That picture 31was great. My favorite of the very hot Captain Applegate is number 15 in chain of command. Damn did Trish made her look so sexy there as her mind is being whacked, that look on face, the lips and eyes. That is ridiculous. I have no problem at all with Trishbot showing close ups of the faces off all those exquisite women being under various influences of the Indoctrnator or the new combat suit or any other type of control. check it out and you will see what I mean.

Applegate is hot has hell. In fact so are the others, gorgeous faces and tight, fit bodies,maybe the sexiest women I have seen in any comic ever on this site. Can't wait to see them more revealed.

Thanks a lot Trishbot!!!!

Also noticed that one girl who now has black short hair had blonde hair in the cover. I like that. It shows the girls still make decisions on changing their appearances. Or maybe she was programmed to change her hair color because Digitalis or Longcannon or Captain Applegate liked that better. That is just as nice, lol,

Applegate because of her rank seems to have control of the other slaves too. Makes me wonder if she also uses them for her own desires. Has she been warped and her mind made dark to want to use of their bodies too or for some other desires?

I love the idea of this story going forwards and also backwards to learn about the girls and squad, their genesis, and what happened between Applegate and Sugar and how they all these smart, dangerous solders ended up as submissive slaves happily following any command. That will make it complicated and multifaceted with all the different plot thread and also hopefully very long.

All things we will find out....damn wait lol.

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Re: "Military Machine" #2

Postby cyberbobmkii » Wed Jul 04, 2018 10:11 pm

Am I the only one that noticed that Longcannon pulled a Nick Fury and swapped race?

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Re: "Military Machine" #2

Postby Softsubversion » Wed Jul 04, 2018 10:32 pm

Cyberbob,

I did notice he looked different in Chain of Command. He looks a little darker now but maybe he was standing in the light in his one pic on Chain of Command. In either strip he could pass for dark skinned white or a lighter skinned dark race.

He sure looks more sinister now though. I would say a lot of that is because he shaved his head and jettisoned the stubble for a goatee.


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