Doc Is In part two added to gallery!

Written by Doctor Robo, illustrated by Finister Foul, postworked by Trishbot.
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FinisterFoul
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Doc Is In part two added to gallery!

Postby FinisterFoul » Sun Sep 09, 2012 11:42 pm

Greetings all!

Tonight we have added part two of The Doctor is In series which can be viewed here:

http://www.metrobaycomix.com/members/ga ... CTOR-IS-IN

Has Ted Twiss gone bonkers?! It seems he has reverted back to his old Dr Twisted evil persona. What demented scheme has he concocted for Ms Metrobay?! Read the full ten page update... if you dare! :twisted:

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Re: Doc Is In part two added to gallery!

Postby dumbtime » Mon Sep 10, 2012 6:26 pm

Most excellent banter between Ted and Kelly. Really made me laugh out loud.

I think that even though she held out against the machine, Ted is one step ahead or 'up.' LOL

I think this was a ruse to get Ms. Metrobay overconfident. That's my guess but i'm very looking forward to finding out what's next. :D

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Re: Doc Is In part two added to gallery!

Postby kittysarah » Mon Sep 10, 2012 6:55 pm

Hihi, yeah, good dialog.
She's being so calm. She's more annoyed than angry, confident that Ted is bound to fail miserably.

Omegabot says "MS Metrobay will love beng an obedient slave just like she does". If ever Ted tries to push Omegabot's personality into Ms Metrobay, putting my 2 cents on their minds switching places!

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Re: Doc Is In part two added to gallery!

Postby Doctor Robo » Mon Sep 10, 2012 7:46 pm

Hi Dumbtime and Kittysarah. Thanks for the kind words. We decided to have a little fun with the dialogue for this issue and not be so serious. I'm glad you enjoyed it!

- Doc

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Re: Doc Is In part two added to gallery!

Postby TheAngelicOne » Tue Sep 11, 2012 12:17 pm

Really nice, the hair cutting was awesome humiliation and the fact Metrobay broke the machine was a good alternative to it working straight away. Wonder how the Doc will crack it up a notch.... XD

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Re: Doc Is In part two added to gallery!

Postby ajiehb » Tue Sep 18, 2012 3:56 pm

Ha ha )) It was very enjoyable reading mostly because of genial dialogues ! Especial on the last page " this ain't my first rodeo " :lol: the girl from Wild West sure knows a lot about rodeo ))

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Re: Doc Is In part two added to gallery!

Postby Doctor Robo » Thu Sep 20, 2012 9:12 pm

Thanks for the comments, AngelicOne and Ajiehb. I'm glad you're enjoying the story. Check back Sunday for the next chapter!

- Doc


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