The Doctor Is In - chapter 3

Written by Doctor Robo, illustrated by Finister Foul, postworked by Trishbot.
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The Doctor Is In - chapter 3

Postby Doctor Robo » Sun Sep 23, 2012 8:43 pm

Hot off the presses! "The Doctor Is In" chapter 3 is now available in the members area of MetrobayComix.com!

http://metrobaycomix.com/

Ms. Metrobay has foiled Dr. Twisted's plans to transform her into a 'human robot' by using her mind to shut down his brainwashing machine. But the mad scientist has an alternate idea up his sleeve, and it somehow involves the busty blonde Omegabot!

We hope you enjoy the chapter. Please feel free to leave a comment below and let us know what you think. Your opinions mean a lot to us!

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Re: The Doctor Is In - chapter 3

Postby hypno85 » Sun Sep 23, 2012 10:30 pm

Sorry the pun
Ms, Metrobay a old mind going to waste
Metrobot online

Nice and hot

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Re: The Doctor Is In - chapter 3

Postby MacroLass » Mon Sep 24, 2012 12:11 am

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<snicker>

Loved the bit about "superheroine porno websites". I admit I'm enjoying the humor here.

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Re: The Doctor Is In - chapter 3

Postby sohta123 » Mon Sep 24, 2012 5:53 am

Pretty hot. Maybe you could add a twist in which her mind goes up for sale on the internet and some other miscreant puts it in some simple robot or machine or in a person with no powers. In either case she should have some trouble remembering for a bit.

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Re: The Doctor Is In - chapter 3

Postby dumbtime » Mon Sep 24, 2012 5:48 pm

wowie, wow! wow! wow!

This is really a dream come true. I've been hoping for a few things to happen to Ms. Metrobay. Lobotomizing her to be a cow on command was truely off the hook but, this is off the hizzie. I really hope these isn't some dream sequence or alternate universe.

If I read it right, Ms Metrobay isn't there anymore. She's been overwritten by Omegabot's programming. I'm hoping this doesn't mean temporary replacement like VG and AW in those helmets. I understand that she has the constitution to heal herself and that might lead to regened brain cells or something like that and those cell might have the original thought coding of her old thoughts but, it would be nice to see her "overwritten" for some time to come. And I mean overwriten to the point that Silver Satin's reverse machine can't help. And the word "Overwritten." sounds so much more deeper than "Robotomized." Or, maybe not. I am Really digging this series even more than I was and can't wait to see what's next.

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Re: The Doctor Is In - chapter 3

Postby Doctor Robo » Sun Sep 30, 2012 2:19 pm

@hypno85: Given the circumstances I think your pun is quite apt.

@MacroLass: Thanks! We're trying to give this story a bit lighter tone than some of the others. I'm glad you're enjoying it.

@sohta123: That's an interesting idea. Thanks for sharing it.

@dumbtime: I think it's cool that you're enjoying it as much as you are. Your compliments mean a lot to us.

Thanks for the comments, everyone!

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Re: The Doctor Is In - chapter 3

Postby Dawgy » Mon Oct 01, 2012 10:55 pm

Will this story have any threads from chrome virus? Or is it completely independent. It seems possible whats happening to lisa right now in chrome but be what triggers this new ted to emerge.

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Re: The Doctor Is In - chapter 3

Postby Doctor Robo » Thu Oct 04, 2012 8:28 pm

Dawgy wrote:Will this story have any threads from chrome virus? Or is it completely independent. It seems possible whats happening to lisa right now in chrome but be what triggers this new ted to emerge.

It's hard for me to answer that without giving away some plot details, but for now I can say that these two stories don't have much to do with each other.

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Re: The Doctor Is In - chapter 3

Postby Hector6 » Sat Oct 06, 2012 12:49 am

Dear Doc, Finister Foul and Trishbot:

The doctor is In # 3 was awesome and at the same level, disturbing… I’m almost wishing this is not in continuity because the thought of destroying Ms. Metrobay’s brain is so horrible to contemplate.

I loved seeing Omegabot, but when Ted took out her hair, to see her like a robot was a shock… and about converting Ms. Metrobay in a robot, I can see why Ted is eager to see if this works… is truly a mad scientist dream.

Great work!

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Re: The Doctor Is In - chapter 3

Postby Doctor Robo » Sun Oct 14, 2012 5:46 pm

Hector6 wrote:Dear Doc, Finister Foul and Trishbot:

The doctor is In # 3 was awesome and at the same level, disturbing… I’m almost wishing this is not in continuity because the thought of destroying Ms. Metrobay’s brain is so horrible to contemplate.

I loved seeing Omegabot, but when Ted took out her hair, to see her like a robot was a shock… and about converting Ms. Metrobay in a robot, I can see why Ted is eager to see if this works… is truly a mad scientist dream.

Great work!


Thanks! I have had the basic idea for this story bumping around in my brain for a while now, and the switch to our new website seemed like a good time to actually get it done.

All of everyone's questions and concerns about the fate of our characters will be answered when the story ends... but a few new ones will be asked as well. How's that for a tease?

- Doc

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Re: The Doctor Is In - chapter 3

Postby sohta123 » Sat Nov 03, 2012 1:45 pm

I like the idea of a heroines mind being reformatted verses just having the pointers in memory removed and then restored.
That sets up some interesting possibilities for characters.
1. Permanent thrall. Simply a bot.
2. New personality provided.
3. Someone else's personality copied into.
4. The character's personality restored but from a past period. Meaning they lose any experiences or memories between the restore point and the present.
5. Multiple personalities in memory

Thanks for making this one interesting and humorous. Can't want for the next update. Hope it's a tie-in to the larger story of chrome virus/ drone agenda.

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Re: The Doctor Is In - chapter 3

Postby Doctor Robo » Thu Nov 22, 2012 9:54 pm

sohta123 wrote:Thanks for making this one interesting and humorous. Can't want for the next update. Hope it's a tie-in to the larger story of chrome virus/ drone agenda.


Thanks for the kind words. I appreciate it. This story will most definitely tie into a larger plot that we've been planning for a while, but I can't say anything more until all is said and done in a couple of weeks. Stay tuned!

- Doc


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