"Physique" Chapter 20

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"Physique" Chapter 20

Postby Trishbot » Sun Jul 08, 2018 9:22 am

Hey everyone! Here with the last issue of "Physique"! I hope you've enjoyed the ride, but we have one last chapter left to share.

The day is saved and everything is right with Valient Grrl, but she's decided the time is right to take her relationship with Alpha Woman to the next level. As the two lovers discover a form of intimacy they had never pursued before, the future looks bright for the couple. But a lingering shadow hides in the distance... Find out what happens in the final issue of "Physique" Chapter 20, only at Metrobay Comix!

http://metrobaycomix.com/members/gal/index.php/Physique/Chapter-20
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Re: "Physique" Chapter 20

Postby abc » Fri Jul 13, 2018 7:15 pm

Haven't been on the forum for a bit. Was really surprised that no one had commented on the finale until I read about the website woes?
I was actually quick enough to read this chapter.

Maybe I'm the only one?

In that case, I can't believe that Max Indeks turned out to be a werewolf!

And that everything we've ever read has just been Gadget Girl's opium dreams! Universe reset!

I can't wait to see the Flintstones crossover you've set up for the next story!

But on the subject of things that are actually true, it's been a great story with a fun finish! Thanks :D

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Re: "Physique" Chapter 20

Postby Hector6 » Fri Jul 13, 2018 11:31 pm

abc wrote:Haven't been on the forum for a bit. Was really surprised that no one had commented on the finale until I read about the website woes?
I was actually quick enough to read this chapter.
Maybe I'm the only one?


Hi Iods, there was a problem with the site since last sunday, I think we are the first ones who have seen the story.

abc wrote: I can't believe that Max Indeks turned out to be a werewolf!


Oh come on, it was very obvious if you think a little about it, you have missed all the subtle clues they planted in all the narrative.

abc wrote: And that everything we've ever read has just been Gadget Girl's opium dreams!


I personally think that Trishbot dropped the ball in this issue, I mean, if Metrobay Comics would turn to be the dream of a character, that character would have been Flygirl, who is the one obsessed with everyone else... However, I give her points for having the queen of hearts as a shout out of Alice's Red King ("Throught the looking glass").

abc wrote: Universe reset!


This is not even original, McTek have done an universe reset before, I fear that we will have soon (maybe two years from now) an event to reset the reset, like "Crisis of the infinite earths".

abc wrote: I can't wait to see the Flintstones crossover you've set up for the next story!


I don't want to sound like I am picky, but there were a lot of other old cartoon shows with a LOT of more fetishistic "unintenional" content to make a crosover (even when I have always liked Betty Marble, even more than Wilma). For example, "Space Ghost", "Birdman", "The Herculoids", "Jana of the Jungle", would have been better options, and all of them are superheroes (or in case of Jana, a Jungle Girl). Those Hanna Barbera shows I consider most fethisistic (is that a word?) that the Flinstones.

But I want to ask Trishbot to make a crossover with the Akonkid's universe? Will ever Vanishing Girl be free? (I hope not).


abc wrote: But on the subject of things that are actually true, it's been a great story with a fun finish! Thanks :D


I think that your comments were good, but you missed the most intriguing parts of this storyline:

1. The introduction of the "Memory Master" character that offered to restore every brainwashed heroine memories if he can enslave any heroine (or vixen) he likes, restoring White Mouse memories as Clawudette I. I think Pink Pussycat will escape to be his slave because Max will not be
2. Mechana kidnapping Ted Twist and Belinda, menacing Belinda with destroying Ted mind unless she agrees to be Ted's mindless sexual slave forever. Will she agree, or will she use Belindabot to fight Mechana? And what will Lisa do? I mean, I cannot blame Mechana, because Ted and Belinda can give Pink Pussycat and Adonis a run for their money in the "unresolved sexual tension" department.
3. Notre Dame saving Valient Grrrl ass when Physique was going to destroy her. Does that mean that Uroboros will continue "LoSH" here in Metrobay Comics?
4. Poodle trapping Briana again, will she ever escape her?
5.The revelation of the true identity of illuminati. I mean, of all the Metrobay characters, who will have suspected him/her?

I invite all the readers to comment about this incredible saga, it was incredible how much things Trish managed to put in only 25 pages.

Hector

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Re: "Physique" Chapter 20

Postby lods » Sun Jul 15, 2018 1:11 pm

The part where Alpha Woman revealed that Snowflake never stopped being her slave unit by having her sort of slide out from under her bed on a sheet of ice was insane. I can't believe Alpha Woman has that level of programming acumen after Night of the Drones. It frankly surpasses the abilities of Marcy, Ted, Belinda, and Sera combined. Maybe that was explained by the temporal inversion that turned Ted into Tess after Belinda grew frustrated waiting, though. Anyway, I think Alpha Woman being more bi is a good direction, though, and it lines up with how she was making all the new drones come with that part standard.

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Re: "Physique" Chapter 20

Postby lods » Sun Jul 15, 2018 1:34 pm

Oh and forgot to compliment the shout out to this video (https://www.youtube.com/embed/HbltwHdA7TI) when Physique took over APEX. Who knew Max was into french poetry.


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