Members Update - Myrrh of the Mynx part 9 !!

[FinisterFoul]

Greetings Mummys and Tomb Robbers!

We have added part 9 of the MYRRH OF THE MYNX series which can be read here:

http://www.metrobaycomix.com/members/ne ... egory/1196

ManCat now tells Madame Mynx what occurred to him down in the ancient Egyptian tomb where mysteries await in the shadows to pounce.

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We needed more time to finish Suffering Suffragettes which will be added next week. Thanks so much!!

[obviousagent]

Am I the only one hoping a new doll joins the team? I hope not.
Nice work.

[FinisterFoul]

Thanks ObviousAgent!!

[obviousagent]

Pleasure, really enjoy the art and stories here.

[lods]

I think I'm a bit confused about the order of events in this comic but I think I'll probably be able to figure it out by the end. (Think it is mostly the very long flash back that is throwing me.)

[bassrass1]

Yes it can be confusing between updates to remember exactly when the current issue is set when we have backstories to deal with.

When its finished however it’ll be much clearer as you can just read it all in one sitting.

So onto chapter 9, I’m loving the ancient Egypt theme. Curses, Gods, traps and incarnations and all with a kinky twist.
I do hope our wild cat makes it free it would be a shame for her to lose her unique look and become a shadow doll.

Well done Finster.

[FinisterFoul]

Thanks Lods and Bassrass!

Yeah, the overall tale has a ton of backstory. And it's progressing slower than I wanted... but we have to add in the sexy bits

If I did it over I would probably break it down into two ongoing parallel stories of the past and present which I think would move things along more dramatically and also let readers attach better to the ancient characters... and also not feel like a 200 page info dump.

At the same time I feel the overall story has so much depth ( more than my usual bubblegum stuff - heh ) that I think readers will stay interested because there's many twists and turns yet.

Thanks so much for the feedback!!

[lods]

Yeah, I usually do a full read through at the end of a story because usually things make way more sense. I kind of wish you'd do longer issues with more gaps in between but not if it would hurt your workflow.

[obviousagent]

Personally I'm not finding this arc that hard to follow, it's like a Tarantino movie the way it flits to back story amid the present action; which I like. This does kind of put a stop on the little Tigress joining the dolls, though I still hope she does if only till Morris or Bast save her. The whole joining the other side as a temporary corruption, I feel works to give the added element of peril and a dash of hopelessness or defeat before the hero/heroine saves the day. Doesn't have to be a permanent change.

[lods]

It is more about remembering who all the characters and their new personas/costumes for this one.

[obviousagent]

Ah, actually that's a good point

[FinisterFoul]

Ahh - good points.

The wiki is kind of on a rebuild. Perhaps I could add a character portfolio inside the Myrrh of Mynx gallery album.

Thanks for the suggestion about longer updates. I will try to do that now.

Thanks a lot!!

[jabbers]

I was pleasantly surprised by this chapter! As backstory, I was expecting it to be a bit more dry for some reason, but there was still some good action. The posing on page 153 and 154 were especially well done, certainly deserving of the extra bonus. It will be fun to see how things unfold. Nice job!

[FinisterFoul]

Thanks a lot Jabbers!